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    For your critique. Rgds


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    Default portrait early in the morning

    Hi, i would prefer to give the background a bit blur and darking the 4 edges by using the burning tools. so the child face will be more focus!

    cheers

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    the mood is great. good choice to use black and white. the composition of the light and dark areas works well for me, i focus on the subject's eye naturally.

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    Hi. Thanks for the comments.
    No burning or dodging was done on the photo. Nor was any additional bluring added (i got a bit lazy).
    Only postprocessing done were the conversion to mono, levels adjustment and unsharp mask.
    Originally shot in color with Pentax Optio 30.

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    Some pictures miss out something....which I dunno what it is..but
    this shot works for me.... Good take.

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    The child looks too bright eyed and wide awake for the introductory title.

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