6th August 2005, 07:32 PM
a portrait early in the morning
For your critique. Rgds
7th August 2005, 12:04 AM
portrait early in the morning
Hi, i would prefer to give the background a bit blur and darking the 4 edges by using the burning tools. so the child face will be more focus!
7th August 2005, 12:10 AM
the mood is great. good choice to use black and white. the composition of the light and dark areas works well for me, i focus on the subject's eye naturally.
7th August 2005, 08:49 AM
Hi. Thanks for the comments.
No burning or dodging was done on the photo. Nor was any additional bluring added (i got a bit lazy).
Only postprocessing done were the conversion to mono, levels adjustment and unsharp mask.
Originally shot in color with Pentax Optio 30.
9th August 2005, 04:00 AM
Some pictures miss out something....which I dunno what it is..but
this shot works for me.... Good take.
20th August 2005, 09:22 PM
Re: a portrait early in the morning
The child looks too bright eyed and wide awake for the introductory title.