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Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: bendemeer
Posts: 243
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Here is a shot I took of a police coast guard boat the other day while shooting the NDP preview show. I liked it because the sunset really lights up the waters and the boat is silhoutted against it. Sort of guarding the golden waves...
First time I am posting a shot for critique. Any comments are welcome. ![]() |
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Senior Member
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Singapore
Posts: 3,483
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I would prefer a wider shot.... also, a lower angle and a silouhette of the patrol boat will be nice...
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Join Date: Mar 2005
Posts: 435
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The sihouette doesnt seem distinct to me as the bottom right corner of the frame is also dark. You could have waited for the boat to move to the lighter source.
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Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: bendemeer
Posts: 243
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I wasnt sure how to get a proper silhouette. Any more underexposure would have spoiled the sunset light. I think I messed that up. Thanks for your comments |
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Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: bendemeer
Posts: 243
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Thanks |
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