In my world

natnivek · 2nd August 2005

For your critique...

shojibake · 2nd August 2005

Great concept! The only downer is that one jet of water up the rear end.

denniskee · 2nd August 2005

nice shot you got there.

like
1st little girl @ the left, standing @ ease, enjoying the view.
man to her right kind of uneasy or disapprove childrens playing with water.
the boy to his right gets ready for action.
the boy holding the umbrella and the lady behind him are wondering if its really that fun playing in the fountain.
the photog taking the shoot of the kid you shot, but from higher angle and its a frontal shot of the kid.
the last lady standing @ the right of the photo, holding her husband's arm has a facial expression thats looks like???
only the kid is in color is also very

tell tale sign of the kid is a little girl is there, just have to look out for it.

dislike
as shojibak had pointed out, the jet washing the kid ass. ha ha ha.

natnivek · 2nd August 2005

Hi shojibake & Dennis,

Thanks for the comments! I actually thought that I would've prefered the jet of water to be there. Without it, the scene wouldn't have "wrapped" the little girl in it so effectively. Lucky timing.

Cheers!

rahul · 3rd August 2005

The girl in colour contrasted against the B&W background plays out very well.
Nicely done.

nitellort · 15th August 2005

can i ask how did u take this shot???

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natnivek Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Eastside Posts: 836	In my world For your critique...

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denniskee Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: bukit batok Posts: 4,212	nice shot you got there. like 1st little girl @ the left, standing @ ease, enjoying the view. man to her right kind of uneasy or disapprove childrens playing with water. the boy to his right gets ready for action. the boy holding the umbrella and the lady behind him are wondering if its really that fun playing in the fountain. the photog taking the shoot of the kid you shot, but from higher angle and its a frontal shot of the kid. the last lady standing @ the right of the photo, holding her husband's arm has a facial expression thats looks like??? only the kid is in color is also very tell tale sign of the kid is a little girl is there, just have to look out for it. dislike as shojibak had pointed out, the jet washing the kid ass. ha ha ha. __________________ photography makes one sees things from all angles.

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nitellort Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Pasir Ris Posts: 167	Re: In my world can i ask how did u take this shot???

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shojibake Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 385	Great concept! The only downer is that one jet of water up the rear end.

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rahul Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: bendemeer Posts: 243	The girl in colour contrasted against the B&W background plays out very well. Nicely done.