1972 n°1

kris1972 · 28th July 2005

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Ah Pao · 29th July 2005

How about processing it further to give a 'grain' effect?
Rough, untamed, raw.

A smoke trail may add interest to the photo, camouflaging the dull background.

A.A · 29th July 2005

a sense of motion to the pic may be jus right to give it a added punch

ortega · 29th July 2005

motion outside the window would be good
a looser crop with more of the interior of the car and smoke from the ciggy would add to the 1972 effect, if that is the effect that you are after.

also as mentioned above more grain. And burn in the right side of the hand

AntiFruits · 29th July 2005

sorry for my ignorance. but what would burning the right side of the hand do? what kind of an effect will that acheive. can someone please enlighten me?

ortega · 30th July 2005

"burning" is darkroom lingo for
exposing more

so burning the right side of the hand will hopefully bring back more details in that area.

mattlock · 31st July 2005

kris, you post this in Critique Corner but you don't mention any specific thing?

28th July 2005	#1
kris1972 New Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: antwerp Posts: 29	1972 n°1 http://www.krisverdonck.com

29th July 2005	#3
A.A Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 69	a sense of motion to the pic may be jus right to give it a added punch __________________ Asian.Alcholic... Hic... :bsmilie:

29th July 2005	#4
ortega Moderator Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: NorthEast Posts: 16,504	motion outside the window would be good a looser crop with more of the interior of the car and smoke from the ciggy would add to the 1972 effect, if that is the effect that you are after. also as mentioned above more grain. And burn in the right side of the hand __________________ The Law

30th July 2005	#6
ortega Moderator Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: NorthEast Posts: 16,504	"burning" is darkroom lingo for exposing more so burning the right side of the hand will hopefully bring back more details in that area. __________________ The Law

29th July 2005	#2
Ah Pao Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Singapore Posts: 1,578	How about processing it further to give a 'grain' effect? Rough, untamed, raw. A smoke trail may add interest to the photo, camouflaging the dull background.

29th July 2005	#5
AntiFruits Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 97	sorry for my ignorance. but what would burning the right side of the hand do? what kind of an effect will that acheive. can someone please enlighten me?

31st July 2005	#7
mattlock Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 1,725	kris, you post this in Critique Corner but you don't mention any specific thing?