![]() |
|
|||||||
| Notices |
| Critique Corner Post your image in here to get serious and honest feedback from fellow photographers. Please read FAQ before posting. |
|
|
|
|
Thread Tools |
|
|
#1 |
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Singapore
Posts: 1,701
|
ok, now is my turn to put my photo up here for yr critiques.
this photo was taken during SSF05, settings as stated on the orig photo. in post processed version, i saturated and did a tighter crop mainly to focus on the dancer. my purpose was to capture the motion effect of the dancer while he was performing and the ambient lighting as well (but it was overblown in the background). 2nd curtain was used to freeze the motion just before the shutter closes. what do u guys think? does this achieve the objective? does the shutter speed to slow? thanks. Orig photo. ![]() PSed. ![]() |
|
|
|
|
#2 |
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Tampines
Posts: 2,092
|
Hi Scud,
I like the technique, but the background is too cluttered for my liking. But considerinf that you took it during the SSF05, there is nothing much you can do about it. |
|
|
|
|
#3 |
|
Moderator
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: NorthEast
Posts: 16,505
|
i think that you are right the shutter speed is too slow
the movement of the dancer cannot be seen, so to me it doen not meet the objective, maybe by under exposing the ambient light the dance will then be main focus instead of fighting with the bg.
__________________
The Law |
|
|
| Sponsored Link |
|
|
#4 |
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Singapore
Posts: 1,701
|
thanks guys for the inputs.
a faster shutter speed will definately reduce the motion effect. |
|
|
|
|
#5 | |
|
Member
Join Date: Jan 2002
Posts: 785
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
#6 | |
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Singapore
Posts: 1,701
|
if need to capture more motion blur, isnt slower s.speed is essential? but if s.speed is too slow, u will get something like what u say 'like a ghost materialising and not a dancer' which i totally agree. thanks. |
|
|
|
![]() |
| Bookmarks |
| Thread Tools | |
|