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Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: Sengkang
Posts: 1,691
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Captured this when I was back in my hometown in Malaysia..
Did I manage to capture the atmosphere of old barber shop and the mood of the customer?? ![]() |
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Join Date: Oct 2003
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i think you have captured the atmosphere of the old barber shop well. for me, the most interesting part of the photo are the expressions of the people in the mirror, so i would explore a tighter crop sans the right hand side, which also adds a touch of the surreal to the pic, as life can only be clearly seen through the mirror.
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Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: West of Singapore
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Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: singapore
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I felt 2 step to the left would be perfect. As for the crop cutting the legs off the chair might be better in drawing the eye to the reflection.
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Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: Simei
Posts: 227
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I was viewing this when my son came along and said: "This is a really old baber shop!". Then he added:"Why does the view in the mirror has color and outside has no color?"
Isn;t that what we all aim to do - get an immediate reaction which coincides with what we wanted it to be. Techinical issues aside, I say this picture is a success. |
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Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: singapore
Posts: 108
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I don't understand why / how your boy's question coincides with the photographer's aim for the shot?
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Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Western SG
Posts: 1,507
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I prefer the image in the mirror to be in Black and White. Should dodge the edge to give it a older look? just sharing
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