26th July 2005, 01:58 PM
26th July 2005, 02:10 PM
looks like camera shake all over, just less visible on the foreground
tips: use a tripod or monopod
slow sync flash to fill in and freeze a moment
go closer and crop tighter
anything that does not add to an image
26th July 2005, 09:57 PM
I think the image has potential. What I don't like so much is the many people and the doorway in the background which distract from the juggler. Tighter framing/cropping might help.
The other thing is that the juggler's legs are blocked from view by some kind of box. Due to the perspective, that box looks more bulky and prominent than the juggler himself. Maybe one could work around this by cropping the picture so as to include only the upper body of the juggler.
2nd August 2005, 03:30 PM
3rd August 2005, 12:59 AM
This is much better than the original.
The man's expression is very haunting.
Somehow it would have been better if he had been looking at the flame. Would have drawn viewer's attention to it. Now it looks a bit disjointed.
5th August 2005, 11:31 PM
Any more thoughts folks? can i put up my next pic for scrutiny?
6th August 2005, 12:29 AM
I like it. If the resolution is still good enough after cropping, it oculd make a nice poster.
Originally Posted by sejok