Photojournal pic

kuxion · 25th July 2005

Any comments?

Ben1223 · 25th July 2005

Quite an interesting pic. I have nothing to say about the photo except that maybe it needs a caption.

Jek · 26th July 2005

tells a story and subject is pretty clear-cut.

globalshooter · 26th July 2005

an interesting pix. wished the expressions on the face will be clearer.

eikin · 26th July 2005

you title it a 'Photojournal pic' but i don't know what you are trying to say in this picture. like what Ben1223 says, yes, you need a caption. A photojournalist must know how to write as well.

binbeto · 26th July 2005

Like the pic. The play of light and shadow is good. The slight motion blur create a good tension on the pic.

Maybe can clone off the "lights" at the background?

A.A · 26th July 2005

Pic is ok... lights in background give the pic a depth... Caption is need to make the pic good or excellent.

ortega · 26th July 2005

i 2nd that the pix is ok with the bg lights, it does give it a sense of depth.

i also agree that it needs a caption or a story.

kuxion · 29th July 2005

thanks for all your comments. I havent thought of a caption for the pic yet.. just thought of putting it up for some photographic comments first..

henrylim · 31st July 2005

Originally Posted by kuxion

thanks for all your comments. I havent thought of a caption for the pic yet.. just thought of putting it up for some photographic comments first..

How about "Hawker's Nightlife"?

Ah Pao · 1st August 2005

Or simply tell us where you took this picture, and your own personal story with it?

kuxion · 5th August 2005

Will 'Trying to make a living' be a good title?

.. this photo is taken from my china trip. I dun rem which province but it was one of the rural ones where there are no street lights at all. The only lights in the streets were these hawkers selling food. I find that there is a lot of energy in this scene so I took the pic..

SniperD · 5th August 2005

when you take a picture: ask yourself why you like the scene that makes you wanna capture it? Then it would be easier for you to translate that same feeling into your pic.

25th July 2005	#1
kuxion New Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 49	Photojournal pic Any comments?

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Jek Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: serangoon nrth Posts: 57	tells a story and subject is pretty clear-cut. __________________ www.flickr.com/photos/jek

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eikin Moderator Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: 東京 Tokyo Posts: 10,920	you title it a 'Photojournal pic' but i don't know what you are trying to say in this picture. like what Ben1223 says, yes, you need a caption. A photojournalist must know how to write as well. __________________ APAD

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binbeto Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Behind a lens Posts: 2,382	Like the pic. The play of light and shadow is good. The slight motion blur create a good tension on the pic. Maybe can clone off the "lights" at the background? __________________ Visit my Homepage if you have time. Comments appreciated.

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A.A Member Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 69	Pic is ok... lights in background give the pic a depth... Caption is need to make the pic good or excellent. __________________ Asian.Alcholic... Hic... :bsmilie:

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Ben1223 Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Bedok, Singapore Posts: 548	Quite an interesting pic. I have nothing to say about the photo except that maybe it needs a caption.

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globalshooter Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Posts: 138	an interesting pix. wished the expressions on the face will be clearer.

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ortega Moderator Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: NorthEast Posts: 16,504	i 2nd that the pix is ok with the bg lights, it does give it a sense of depth. i also agree that it needs a caption or a story. __________________ The Law

29th July 2005	#9
kuxion New Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 49	thanks for all your comments. I havent thought of a caption for the pic yet.. just thought of putting it up for some photographic comments first..

1st August 2005	#11
Ah Pao Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Singapore Posts: 1,578	Or simply tell us where you took this picture, and your own personal story with it?

5th August 2005	#12
kuxion New Member Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 49	Will 'Trying to make a living' be a good title? .. this photo is taken from my china trip. I dun rem which province but it was one of the rural ones where there are no street lights at all. The only lights in the streets were these hawkers selling food. I find that there is a lot of energy in this scene so I took the pic..

5th August 2005	#13
SniperD Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Behind the viewfinder... Posts: 5,954	when you take a picture: ask yourself why you like the scene that makes you wanna capture it? Then it would be easier for you to translate that same feeling into your pic. __________________ EYE-DEAS