23rd July 2005, 07:01 PM
Looking after Jonjon
For your critique. Thanks.
23rd July 2005, 10:48 PM
The little guy in the foreground looks slightly out of focus - apart from that, I love this picture. It reminds me of some of Henri Cartier-Bresson's photos. It portrays not only the parent(?)-kid interaction, but also a bit of lifestyle. This might make for an interesting "historic" document in the future.
Originally Posted by Ben1223
23rd July 2005, 11:30 PM
not too comfortable with the doorframe and wall skirting 'running into' Jonjon's head, maybe the effect won't be that bad in a colour version. it's a nice moment though judging by the lady's smile.
23rd July 2005, 11:57 PM
two more things to add
it would also be nice to see the other person's face,
i imagine a pov from jonjon's height