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    For your critique. Thanks.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Ben1223
    For your critique. Thanks.

    The little guy in the foreground looks slightly out of focus - apart from that, I love this picture. It reminds me of some of Henri Cartier-Bresson's photos. It portrays not only the parent(?)-kid interaction, but also a bit of lifestyle. This might make for an interesting "historic" document in the future.

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    not too comfortable with the doorframe and wall skirting 'running into' Jonjon's head, maybe the effect won't be that bad in a colour version. it's a nice moment though judging by the lady's smile.

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    two more things to add

    it would also be nice to see the other person's face,
    i imagine a pov from jonjon's height

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