Looking after Jonjon

Ben1223 · 23rd July 2005

For your critique. Thanks.

LittleWolf · 23rd July 2005

Originally Posted by Ben1223

For your critique. Thanks.

The little guy in the foreground looks slightly out of focus - apart from that, I love this picture. It reminds me of some of Henri Cartier-Bresson's photos. It portrays not only the parent(?)-kid interaction, but also a bit of lifestyle. This might make for an interesting "historic" document in the future.

eikin · 23rd July 2005

not too comfortable with the doorframe and wall skirting 'running into' Jonjon's head, maybe the effect won't be that bad in a colour version. it's a nice moment though judging by the lady's smile.

ortega · 23rd July 2005

two more things to add

it would also be nice to see the other person's face,
i imagine a pov from jonjon's height

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