Park Scene

Ben1223 · 23rd July 2005

Pls critique. Thanks

tunster · 23rd July 2005

Crop tighter with just that 3 cyclists will be nice. Zoom in your camera man.

denniskee · 23rd July 2005

can consider shifting to the left to include the tree on the left, so as to form a frame?

edit : sorry, mix up me left and right. what i mean to say is to shift to the right include the tree on the right, shift up to include the brenches, than you have a frame.

eikin · 23rd July 2005

it's definitely not a good frame, the elements don't quite gel together. but the scene does have some feel to it. give it a sepia tone, it may just work.

ortega · 23rd July 2005

crop away the foreground and use the tree and the bench as the foregrond
include the tree on the right
some sky details would also be nice to complete the park scene
also a bit more leaves on top

23rd July 2005	#1
Ben1223 Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Bedok, Singapore Posts: 548	Park Scene Pls critique. Thanks

23rd July 2005	#3
denniskee Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: bukit batok Posts: 4,214	can consider shifting to the left to include the tree on the left, so as to form a frame? edit : sorry, mix up me left and right. what i mean to say is to shift to the right include the tree on the right, shift up to include the brenches, than you have a frame. __________________ photography makes one sees things from all angles. Last edited by denniskee; 24th July 2005 at 12:03 AM.

23rd July 2005	#4
eikin Moderator Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: 東京 Tokyo Posts: 10,920	it's definitely not a good frame, the elements don't quite gel together. but the scene does have some feel to it. give it a sepia tone, it may just work. __________________ APAD

23rd July 2005	#5
ortega Moderator Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: NorthEast Posts: 16,507	crop away the foreground and use the tree and the bench as the foregrond include the tree on the right some sky details would also be nice to complete the park scene also a bit more leaves on top __________________ The Law

23rd July 2005	#2
tunster Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Hong Kong Posts: 1,438	Crop tighter with just that 3 cyclists will be nice. Zoom in your camera man.