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Old 11th July 2005   #1
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it has been a very long time since i last posted.
well here it is.. hope to learn more frm others here
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Old 11th July 2005   #2
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please use a tripod?
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Old 11th July 2005   #3
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Hi gabriel06

Such a nice photo but the camera shake hurt it

If you get another chance to take it again, doooo as it would have been quite nice with a little crop.

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Old 11th July 2005   #4
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reflection addon doesnt blend with the other half of the water. Horizon tilted. If no tripod just use the trashcan or railings. oly ultra zoom cam more than capable in taking nightshots.

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Old 13th July 2005   #5
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i will indeed try to use a tripod.. thanks for the comments
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Old 13th July 2005   #6
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Beside tripod, composition can be tighter. If you want to show the reflection, i suggest shoot it tighter, forget about the sheares bridge.
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Old 13th July 2005   #7
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Where did u shoot the reflection? Boat?
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Old 13th July 2005   #8
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ya set a tripod and a longer exposure, crop from the right and shift to the left
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Old 13th July 2005   #9
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the reflection is frm the top of my car.. yup thats y there is a slight curve which makes its more special i feel..
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Old 13th July 2005   #10
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i can actually make do with all the shake n graininess.. but at least crop the photograph? dun think the space at the bottom (supposedly your car roof rite?) is of any use... also the sky above can also b cropped slightly...
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Old 13th July 2005   #11
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The idea of using the top of the car for reflection is great! Makes the viewer ponder.

Blurred image, should have used a tripod or higher ISO. Steady hands are a must. Too much sky on the top right, I would have taken more of the buildings and boats. I would also have tried taking only the top of the car, making a more abstract picture.
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I beg to differ. I get the feeling that the blurred image works in this case. It's a moving vehicle!

Besides, assuming that we didn't know that it was shot off the roof, and think a conversion to B&W plus a crop off the bottom would make a great B&W abstract. Paint...don't just take. That's what digital is for.
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Old 14th July 2005   #13
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thanks for the comments would try to compose better b4 shooting.. i guess its a habit for most digital users.. shoot first.. edit later.. my slr is ermm.. rusty man.. been too lazy and troublesome to shoot wif it.. digi is more convenient
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Old 15th July 2005   #14
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this is the edited photo.. comments pls?
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