i think the wire mesh that you were shooting through has not been utilized properly. You could have shot this by going a bit low so that the head of the foreground person was framed by it. Right now it is a bit distracting with the grey artifact on the person's head. It falls on the first point of observation(rule of thirds) and makes the observer lose a bit of interest.Originally Posted by AReality
The photograph is effective in making you follow the line of sight of the foreground person and makes you wonder about the person who is exiting.