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    Hi above artwork is my design to be printed on a mug for corporate gift. some how i still think it still lack of a "WOW' effect. any one any comment?

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    wah, like singapore is hungry for war lay .
    photography makes one sees things from all angles.

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    somehow i feel cos everything is so red, nothing seems to stand out and "wow" the viewer...

    just my humble tots..

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    maybe its too red or something. The colour theme just doesn't suit my taste.

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    Hi

    I think it looks great.

    there's a little uncomfortable space at the bottom left, for consistency's sake you might want to add a little something.

    the faded lines work for me.

    but are you allowed to distort the logo like that? you might want to check.

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    maybe highlight the flag. more contrast of red and white....

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    in my opinion for a mug, opt for more contrasting colours if printed on a white mug. perhaps to fill the spaces, u could try deeping the black of the helicopters, and enlarging them to fill more of the space.

    i think its quite important to consider the final output being a cylinder, rather than a flat graphic design like now. cos ah...when its round, palcement gotta be different. wont be fighting for attention the way a rectangle would, since u wont view the whole artwork at the same time, but only parts of it.

    dunno if im explaining myself coherently...lol.

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    are these apache shot in Singapore?

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    thanks for all comments. the space below left is meant for some content and texts which i haven think of. and the apache pic is not taken in spore
    it's not even here in spore. hee. so wat elso can i enhance on this design? i haven already adjust the RED to not so RED. and the squadron badge is also to distort

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    har~~......like tat still say adjust red to not very red??? I see nothing but red in the design, machiam like the red is everything and hence cr8ing a very bland and lack of punch pic....

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    how abt this?

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    kinda like those holographic stickers =)

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    sorrry but wat is holographic huh? anyone know?

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    i think red color nicer (national color ma)...but if the helicopter got color will be making this theme more striking....

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    I prefer the second one, make one for 125 sqn please
    i am camera stupid, i just take photos > website

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    Quote Originally Posted by walker
    i think red color nicer (national color ma)...but if the helicopter got color will be making this theme more striking....
    Apache's have no colour except... dark.
    i am camera stupid, i just take photos > website

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