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Aim · 1st June 2005

You are welcome to critique

jOhO · 1st June 2005

i feel the framing the the font doesn't suit the subject. but it's a nice try out of the cliche.

as for the shot itself, it seems that the frame is divided into two equal parts ALMOST making it like it's two seperate frames. for me, that's no good.

just some honest comments hope u dun mind.

Aim · 2nd June 2005

Originally Posted by jOhO

i feel the framing the the font doesn't suit the subject. but it's a nice try out of the cliche.

as for the shot itself, it seems that the frame is divided into two equal parts ALMOST making it like it's two seperate frames. for me, that's no good.

just some honest comments hope u dun mind.

Noted with thanks your honest comments.

1st June 2005	#1
Aim Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 171	Rom You are welcome to critique

1st June 2005	#2
jOhO Moderator Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Singapore Posts: 6,454	i feel the framing the the font doesn't suit the subject. but it's a nice try out of the cliche. as for the shot itself, it seems that the frame is divided into two equal parts ALMOST making it like it's two seperate frames. for me, that's no good. just some honest comments hope u dun mind.