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Old 25th April 2005   #1
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Default Amber Reflection.

Like the reflection of this table lamp, so set it up for a shoot.

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Old 25th April 2005   #2
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Nice try.

Minor nitpicks:

1) the table is slightly tilted. Just very slight only.
2) shouldn't have crop the top. would prefer the entire table lamp is inside the pic
3) table got dust? hmmm...
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Old 25th April 2005   #3
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Hi,

ya i agree that the table has dust and it's a tad distracting.
also a bit too yellow, so it makes the picture a little flat for my liking.

just my 2 cents worth anyhow.

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Old 25th April 2005   #4
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Zeckson, interesting idea...perhaps you can try just shooting the reflection without the actual vase in the frame? This will be more abstract.

One thing though, i dun think the vase is attractive enough, some weird shaped vase or perfume bottle may work better?
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should have positioned either the lamp or yourself so that the wire is hidden.
change your WB setting for the kind of light available.
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Perhaps u should have just shot a still-life of the vase alone instead of the reflection
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