Frozen In Time

arttl · 1st April 2005

Hi guys,

Sharing a pic taken from my leisure street shoot.

Frozen In Time

Cheers!

ortega · 2nd April 2005

nice composition, but there is something wrong with it, just can't put my finger on it.
It might just be me, good shot.

digipat2003 · 2nd April 2005

nice try, keep it up

arttl · 2nd April 2005

Originally Posted by ortega

nice composition, but there is something wrong with it, just can't put my finger on it.
It might just be me, good shot.

Ah.... Something wrong??

Might be the loose composition??

Anyway, thanks for viewing guys!

Cheers!

knoxknocks · 3rd April 2005

I would have preferred tighter composition - like a big frozen leaf or something. but that's just me. This looks very much like the experiments practical photography was showing in one of the previous issues.

Good work!!

eikin · 3rd April 2005

the bg is nicely composed, unfortunately the positioning of the leaves create a strong triangle overlapping the rectangles in the bg, leaving the top centre and left portion unbalanced against the dimmer and empty lower and right side. reconsider how the leaves can be recomposed, maybe less leaves, maybe more leaves, maybe different leaves ... u have to experiment.

arttl · 3rd April 2005

Hi guys!

Thanks for the very constructive critiques!! Wow... Really appreciate it!

This shot was taken on the street. So nothing was done in terms of the composition. The leaves were already lying there so all i did was to press the shutter.

Eh.. it was something like a sky-window thingy, so it's almost impossible for me to reach leh.

Anyway, will try a tighter composition and appreciate all your comments!

Cheers!

de_stan · 4th April 2005

Originally Posted by arttl

Hi guys!

Thanks for the very constructive critiques!! Wow... Really appreciate it!

This shot was taken on the street. So nothing was done in terms of the composition. The leaves were already lying there so all i did was to press the shutter.

Eh.. it was something like a sky-window thingy, so it's almost impossible for me to reach leh.

Anyway, will try a tighter composition and appreciate all your comments!

Cheers!

Hey man, remember me !!!
Keep shooting !!!

arttl · 7th April 2005

Hey dude!!

Long time no see ah! How's ur 20D??

Keep in touch!!

1st April 2005	#1
arttl Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Planet PJ Posts: 1,349	Frozen In Time Hi guys, Sharing a pic taken from my leisure street shoot. Frozen In Time Cheers! __________________ WWW.JONYEAP.COM

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ortega Moderator Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: NorthEast Posts: 16,507	nice composition, but there is something wrong with it, just can't put my finger on it. It might just be me, good shot. __________________ The Law

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knoxknocks Moderator Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: lalaland Posts: 3,906	I would have preferred tighter composition - like a big frozen leaf or something. but that's just me. This looks very much like the experiments practical photography was showing in one of the previous issues. Good work!! __________________ work.http://www.tinydotphotography.com . life. http://www.tinyjourneys.com. wpn. http://www.wpn.sg

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eikin Moderator Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: 東京 Tokyo Posts: 10,920	the bg is nicely composed, unfortunately the positioning of the leaves create a strong triangle overlapping the rectangles in the bg, leaving the top centre and left portion unbalanced against the dimmer and empty lower and right side. reconsider how the leaves can be recomposed, maybe less leaves, maybe more leaves, maybe different leaves ... u have to experiment. __________________ APAD

3rd April 2005	#7
arttl Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Planet PJ Posts: 1,349	Hi guys! Thanks for the very constructive critiques!! Wow... Really appreciate it! This shot was taken on the street. So nothing was done in terms of the composition. The leaves were already lying there so all i did was to press the shutter. Eh.. it was something like a sky-window thingy, so it's almost impossible for me to reach leh. Anyway, will try a tighter composition and appreciate all your comments! Cheers! __________________ WWW.JONYEAP.COM

2nd April 2005	#3
digipat2003 Member Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 843	nice try, keep it up

7th April 2005	#9
arttl Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Planet PJ Posts: 1,349	Hey dude!! Long time no see ah! How's ur 20D?? Keep in touch!! __________________ WWW.JONYEAP.COM