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Join Date: Mar 2004
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another try at fruits. this time round oranges. pls critique. thks.
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Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: Yishun , SG
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hmm.. i prefer the #3 one coz it's much closer hence more juicy yummy feeling
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Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: Gim Boon Tai
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Looks really yummy!!
Last pic can do with some filling up at the underside of the orange. |
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Join Date: Jun 2004
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yummy yummy i like #3 too.
did you use studio lights? would you mind sharing the setup? |
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Join Date: Jul 2003
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1st and 2nd shots give me an idea that the oranges are dried. 3rd is the keeper. last shot.... as said not enuff light but dun find the style there.
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Join Date: Mar 2004
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yes, 2 elinchrom 600. main at top left at about 45 degree down. fill at 45 degree also, but angled at same level as object. stil new, playing around lah. orange looks dried? should spray some water on it the next time. thks for the suggestions |
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Join Date: Jun 2004
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you use elinchrome to shoot these?
isn't that too over hardcore? i thought you used some flash gun or some light box anyways, in the first pic, the small rectangle in the cup is the reflection of the lightbox isn't it ![]() |
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Join Date: Jan 2002
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nice go u get a star for effort. I feel these need more work to become the best they can be. the lighting needs refinement.... at least thats what this 80% calbrated lcd shows the compo is not decisive.
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Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Currently in Bangkok, Thailand
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Among the 4, my preference will be the first one whereby all of the details are in focus. I like pictures to be clean and sharp. It gives a lot of details. I am a newbie here so maybe my perception could be wrong.
![]() As for everybody's preference for Pic 3, I feel that it will be better if everything is in focus plus showing a lot of cold water condensation on the glass. That will really make me drool for the juice. ![]() |
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Join Date: Oct 2004
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looks good ~
but too neat imo .. probably I am the messy person .. Since u got a white background/ table .. maybe can try splashing some juices on the table or something ? toppple the glass etc .. giving abit of raunchy feeling .. just my 2cents |
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