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    Default Solitary

    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    Composition, Exposure

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    Minimalistic feel

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    Taken in the evening, about 6.30pm.

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    Well, I feel it certainly achieves the minimalistic feel, but I would like to get feedback on whether the composition works for everyone. Would like to know everyone's thoughts on the image in general; if it's good, bad etc



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    Cropping in would be better..makes me kind of uneasy with the huge empty space

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    Default Re: Solitary

    A little lower, and a little more to the left. I love this!


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    We need more people here that actually bothers about negative space instead of using it as a psychological barrier.

    I say keep it up, and you'll excel beyond that in no time.

    Thanks for sharing!
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    Default Re: Solitary

    I prefer a squre crop and maybe post-processed into black and white with some noise grain added.

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    Default Re: Solitary

    Thanks all for the feedback!

    Will take note about the crop suggestions. I also did try B&W but preferred the colour version actually.

    Thanks all again for taking time to feedback. Much appreciated ^^

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