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    Could be my eyes, but the bottle seems slanted.

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    Quote Originally Posted by reachme2003
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    The shape of the bottle probably suggests the curvature of the female form and the black & white background tells of the contrasting difference between males and females...
    The fuzzy image on top of the bottle probably suggest the shifting gender stereotype ....

    dunno if that is what you are trying to say.. but if it is ...
    its a fantastic work of art ... at least to me ... i'm just a newbie .. so what i say might not be correct
    we have lots to learn from you ....

    Happy shooting

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    Hi, The background makes the shot looks cluttered. If would be good if it's either plain white or black. Or even half black/white to convey zin and yang, the synergy between the opposite sex. The shape and contour of the bottle is interesting, good luck for the competition.

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    If this is meant as a product shot for a client, I'll flip when I see this.

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    Quote Originally Posted by renegade
    Could be my eyes, but the bottle seems slanted.
    renegade, it was intended to 'look up' slightly at the product, thus the slanted angle.

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    Quote Originally Posted by renegade
    Could be my eyes, but the bottle seems slanted.
    It IS slanted.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sputnik
    The shape of the bottle probably suggests the curvature of the female form and the black & white background tells of the contrasting difference between males and females...
    The fuzzy image on top of the bottle probably suggest the shifting gender stereotype ....

    dunno if that is what you are trying to say.. but if it is ...
    its a fantastic work of art ... at least to me ... i'm just a newbie .. so what i say might not be correct
    we have lots to learn from you ....

    Happy shooting
    bwahahahaha. SURELY, you can't be serious

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    Quote Originally Posted by reachme2003
    renegade, it was intended to 'look up' slightly at the product, thus the slanted angle.
    Execution doesn't convey the intention.

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    Doesn't appeal to me either. White and black lines at the back is very distracting. It's making my eyes looking at the lines. Cutting away the product itself is also a no no. Well for me that is.

    I know it depends on what your clients needs but for me, I would still shoot the product, ahem....a little straigter, the name to appear more clearer, plus either less highlights or cleaner higlights.

    The blue colour in between the bottle is also distracting to look at.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pro Image
    Doesn't appeal to me either. White and black lines at the back is very distracting. It's making my eyes looking at the lines. Cutting away the product itself is also a no no. Well for me that is.

    I know it depends on what your clients needs but for me, I would still shoot the product, ahem....a little straigter, the name to appear more clearer, plus either less highlights or cleaner higlights.

    The blue colour in between the bottle is also distracting to look at.
    no client involved, it is self project. thanks for the tips.

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