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Old 25th January 2005   #1
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Old 25th January 2005   #2
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hi benedium

i couldnt really figure out what the main subject is.. a bit overexposed too.. is that the side wall of your house?
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Old 25th January 2005   #3
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Originally Posted by benedium

hi...

personally i think ur photo is greatly over expose and u must took it during lucnh time...

in photography...lunch and noon time is the worst time to shooting. must try to avoid...if you test the sharpness of the photo..definitely this photo is sharp...

but i could not tell the subject of the photo...background and object could not project your idea.

does it sound contributive to you.

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Old 25th January 2005   #4
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crop to a square at the bottom.
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Old 25th January 2005   #5
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the shadow, the wall and the plant...makes the pict complete...no need the sky or the cables
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Old 26th January 2005   #6
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what's ur point in this photo?
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Old 26th January 2005   #7
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Originally Posted by AReality
crop to a square at the bottom.
Agree with this suggestion. The sky & cables does nothing for this photo.
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Old 26th January 2005   #8
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Personally, I like the colors in the picture..always love outstanding colors like this one in the picture. I would say a picture is good when u feel something for it and i do like this one I have seen alot of photographs which are shot or done up nicely but i can't feel anything from it and i would say its just another picture.
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