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Join Date: Dec 2003
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heres my 1st feeble attempt with my new toy.. the BEST among the worst..
::||STRIKE a POSE||:: -- hell... so much floating particle in water.. really hard to take head front shot of this climber.. was vertically upside down taking this bugger on the pillar.. did a crop out of the original.. does it works for u..? or u ppl prefer showing of more skirt? ::||Dot of a Star||:: -- sigh.. too bad the center part of this pic is not in focus.. need more prac.. does this kind of composition ok for u? ::||Huh?||:: -- too bad cant take a front profile of this blennie.. only manage to capture one side of the eyes... does the side lighting works? any suggestion to improve this shots? |
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Join Date: Oct 2003
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1. nice! if the head shaper abit will be nicer! maybe shoot with a lower fstop? then back ground will be more blurr? abit dull on the color? try up the saturation?
2. i like it! too bad whole thing not in focus, the fl20 not too bad hor!?! 3. nice leh! too bad not colorful enough maybe bring out the visible eye more? better then my first try ok! hahaha |
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Join Date: May 2003
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first pic: i cannot make out what it is. It's no good to let your audience guess your subject.
2nd : better. as mentioned, center slight OFF. But ok. 3rd: closer crop perhaps.... |
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Still like your Blennie shot. So cute. Just feel the shadow a bit harsh. Maybe can fix another strobe to fill in on the other side?
Last edited by eel; 22nd January 2005 at 11:46 PM. |
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Wah lau, he so creative sure can find some way one. Maybe even use some LED instead of his guide light or something
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ok, next dive i stay beside him, and we shoot together... my flash fill for him, hehehhehe
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There you go! Bingo!
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OT liao ah OT liao ah.. ...
kthan, can you make out what the first pic is now? siaoon, maybe you should hotlink another photo of it not so cropped so he can see given the continued limitation of one side lighting, maybe it would have been better if from the left instead of the right, due to the piping blockage? |
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Join Date: Mar 2004
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I agree with kthan, couldn't make out what the first picture is.
LIke your second and third shot, although second shot like what the rest said, a bit out of focus. (yah like i pro like that can comment!! )As for the holding hands bit, maybe Dylan got something to add. Where's he?!?! ![]() |
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Yup. The 1st subject has no colour contrast. It would be better not to crop so much and allow the worm to be more visibly seen. When colour is absent, concentrate on the form & texture of the subject.
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ah, nono... the lighting thing i am referring to the blennie. |
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