Virgin shots...

wcy · 2nd August 2002

these are a couple of virgin shots i took while wander around thru town. there are 36 snap i took that day, but i tink onli these few are abit presentable... i resized these pictures so they are more economical in bytes... newbie at work, please comment...

1.

was walking down a dark alley when i saw this ah pek... think he was wondering what i'm doing...

2.

u will notice all my vertical shots are abit slanted... i know... my fault... didn't do it on purpose

3.

think this building have been shot a million times, can't find anything else to snap, so "JUST SHOOT IT"...

4.

was sitting on a bench when this cat stroll up and decided to pose for me... u may find it abit outta focus... read below

5.

was actually trying to focus on the cat, but missed it, cos i placed my camera on the ground, and there's no place for me to lie down to see thru the viewfinder(there's a stone bench behind my camera)

intoxique · 2nd August 2002

2nd pic is nice.
I like the flash thingy.
Looks cool!
Good job can be improve tho..

tomshen · 2nd August 2002

The last one is good, but would be better if the cat looked at the other direction. Not sure y you tilted the first two shots... the fourth one i prefer retaining the cat's ears.

Keep trying

rueyloon · 2nd August 2002

I see potential

nice photos, keep on working hard.

I think there is a wee bit too much floor on the last pic.
there is a building cut 1/2 way, you can either include it in full, or just leave it out.

Darren · 2nd August 2002

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wcy · 2nd August 2002

thanks for all the comments... juz tot i'll add 1 more pic...

6.

another building that has been shot mercilessly by photographers lately... tink this guy makes it abit diff...

Necroist · 2nd August 2002

you're allowed up the esplanade meh?

wcy · 2nd August 2002

i think that guy is juz a construction worker that happen to go to the top to do his stuff...

919956g · 2nd August 2002

3rd pix is belly good, impressive for a beginner

revenant · 2nd August 2002

Quote:

Originally posted by wcy

5.
was actually trying to focus on the cat, but missed it, cos i placed my camera on the ground, and there's no place for me to lie down to see thru the viewfinder(there's a stone bench behind my camera)

How nice would it be if the cat were to be looking at the scenery and you got the focus right on.

2nd August 2002	#1
wcy Member Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: AMK Posts: 70	Virgin shots... these are a couple of virgin shots i took while wander around thru town. there are 36 snap i took that day, but i tink onli these few are abit presentable... i resized these pictures so they are more economical in bytes... newbie at work, please comment... 1. was walking down a dark alley when i saw this ah pek... think he was wondering what i'm doing... 2. u will notice all my vertical shots are abit slanted... i know... my fault... didn't do it on purpose 3. think this building have been shot a million times, can't find anything else to snap, so "JUST SHOOT IT"... 4. was sitting on a bench when this cat stroll up and decided to pose for me... u may find it abit outta focus... read below 5. was actually trying to focus on the cat, but missed it, cos i placed my camera on the ground, and there's no place for me to lie down to see thru the viewfinder(there's a stone bench behind my camera)

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tomshen Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 3,719	The last one is good, but would be better if the cat looked at the other direction. Not sure y you tilted the first two shots... the fourth one i prefer retaining the cat's ears. Keep trying __________________ Visit http://www.tomshenstudio.com

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rueyloon Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 1,528	I see potential nice photos, keep on working hard. I think there is a wee bit too much floor on the last pic. there is a building cut 1/2 way, you can either include it in full, or just leave it out. __________________ 36frames Wedding Photography - http://www.36frames.com rueyloon - http://www.rueyloon.com

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Darren ClubSNAP Admin Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: ClubSNAP HQ Posts: 7,473	Moved due to nature of content - please see posting guidelines for Critique section __________________ Tweet?

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intoxique Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: North. Posts: 107	2nd pic is nice. I like the flash thingy. Looks cool! Good job can be improve tho..

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Necroist Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 461	you're allowed up the esplanade meh?

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919956g Deregistered Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: singapore Posts: 372	3rd pix is belly good, impressive for a beginner