Re: Mosque

peteryeo · 1st January 2005

Hi all,

Please give comment thank you.

Regards
PeterYeo

zaren · 1st January 2005

hi peter,

you have a strong centre of interest which is the ornate arched window opening, and the man looking through it which lends a human scale to it. however, the full impact of its symmetrical beauty is lost because it looks unbalanced in the photo, being "squeezed" too far to the right. the bright colours of the tree and roof in the background also grab attention from the interesting shape and lighting of the arched frame and the man peering out of it. if i can make a suggestion, perhaps you can consider cropping away the empty space at the left and bottom of the photo, and converting the photo into black and white.

cheers,
zaren.

ndroo · 1st January 2005

Originally Posted by zaren

hi peter,

you have a strong centre of interest which is the ornate arched window opening, and the man looking through it which lends a human scale to it. however, the full impact of its symmetrical beauty is lost because it looks unbalanced in the photo, being "squeezed" too far to the right. the bright colours of the tree and roof in the background also grab attention from the interesting shape and lighting of the arched frame and the man peering out of it. if i can make a suggestion, perhaps you can consider cropping away the empty space at the left and bottom of the photo, and converting the photo into black and white.

cheers,
zaren.

how come i can't see the pics and you can?

zaren · 1st January 2005

Originally Posted by renegade

how come i can't see the pics and you can?

at first i couldn't see the pic. then i did a right click on the red cross, copied the web link and viewed the photo via url. after that i can see the pic in this thread.

ndroo · 1st January 2005

Originally Posted by zaren

at first i couldn't see the pic. then i did a right click on the red cross, copied the web link and viewed the photo via url. after that i can see the pic in this thread.

did that too but had 'You don't have permission to access /35/7/80/55/238678055JMMgMg_ph.jpg on this server.' instead

zaren · 1st January 2005

Originally Posted by renegade

did that too but had 'You don't have permission to access /35/7/80/55/238678055JMMgMg_ph.jpg on this server.' instead

ok, here it is. peter, hope you don't mind me linking this from my pbase a/c temporarily.

peteryeo · 1st January 2005

Thank you all for the comment.Here I attach my B&W ver.

Regards
Peteryeo

denniskee · 1st January 2005

solid composition

Would it have been better if the man appears as seliuette (wrong spelling).

peteryeo · 1st January 2005

Hi all,

Thanks you all for yr comment and thank to the one who help me to make my images viewable in this forum.

Thank you zaren.

Regards
PeterYeo

1st January 2005	#1
peteryeo Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: woodlands Posts: 607	Re: Mosque Hi all, Please give comment thank you. Regards PeterYeo

1st January 2005	#8
denniskee Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: bukit batok Posts: 4,212	solid composition Would it have been better if the man appears as seliuette (wrong spelling). __________________ photography makes one sees things from all angles.

1st January 2005	#9
peteryeo Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: woodlands Posts: 607	Re: Mosque Part 2 Hi all, Thanks you all for yr comment and thank to the one who help me to make my images viewable in this forum. Thank you zaren. Regards PeterYeo

1st January 2005	#2
zaren Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 7,698	hi peter, you have a strong centre of interest which is the ornate arched window opening, and the man looking through it which lends a human scale to it. however, the full impact of its symmetrical beauty is lost because it looks unbalanced in the photo, being "squeezed" too far to the right. the bright colours of the tree and roof in the background also grab attention from the interesting shape and lighting of the arched frame and the man peering out of it. if i can make a suggestion, perhaps you can consider cropping away the empty space at the left and bottom of the photo, and converting the photo into black and white. cheers, zaren.