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    Smile innocent eyes of Soumil



    1. in what area is critique to be sought?
    post-processing , i have not done any post processing as i am not clear what to do.

    2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    The eyes and natural moment of a 5 months old boy

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    Just after bath when Soumil was in very good mood

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    I think the picture is crispy,but post processing might add more values.I like the simplicity of the photo.

    Looking for tips/suggestions.
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    Default Re: innocent eyes of Soumil

    imo you should post-process the white balance so that his eye is truly white.(has a slight blue hue now)

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    Default Re: innocent eyes of Soumil

    Suggest you do not crop away part of the child head.
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    Pic is a little too tight.. Suggest you take a step back.. Also, with the child's expression, he looks a little scared.. Maybe cos you're too close..? Nice clean background though.. And focusing on the eyes really brings out the sparkle. I like!

    Did you use flash..? Try not to do that as it may come off as too harsh.

    Thanks for sharing!
    Last edited by bonrya; 24th December 2011 at 06:36 PM.
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    Default Re: innocent eyes of Soumil

    Thanks all for the suggestions,I was a bit scared and anxious for the sugegstions and feedback.

    megain: will try the white balance.I did not notice that part.
    kwttan:will keep that in mind in my next pic
    Bonrya: I did not use the flash,but he was scared because of camera being so close(as you mentioned)
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