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    1. In what area is critique to be sought?
    The composition, as well as how to improve on the photo.

    2. What one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    For viewing pleasure

    3. Under what circumstance is the picture taken?
    Taken at around 10am in the morning

    4. What the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    I like the colours but I am not too sure if the composition is too messy?

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    Next time go "View all sizes", then right click the image and select "Copy image URL".

    About the photo, I think it's too flat and has no obvious point of interest. Try getting more directional light, or maybe if you want an abstract feeling try cropping in really close so that you can't tell immediately what it is.
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    I love the colours here but there's no variation at all and not very interesting. Try taking a wider shot to show the leaves of the plant or a bit of the background. Use a large aperture to focus on the flowers while the background is blurred. This will add to the interest of the photo

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    The quickest comment I can give is that yes, it is too messy in response to your own self-assessment.

    As others have pointed out, there is no strong focal point, neither are there interesting-enough textures to hold interest.

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    It's.. not really interesting. You need a focal point where viewers can get directed to!

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