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    Default Sleepy head.

    Hello all! I'm new to photography and this picture was taken just weeks after I got my camera.

    Taken with:

    Canon EOS 60D
    50mm f/8.0
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    ISO 400

    1. In what area is critique to be sought?
    Anything on the picture.

    2. What one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
    The display of physical expressions through images that people can immediately extract and know what the image(s) says.

    3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
    Daylight, in a boat on a sunny day. This person seemed tired after a day at Pulau Ubin and thus dozed off in the boat.

    4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
    One of the best B/W portraits done since I started.


    Last edited by Natboy; 5th March 2012 at 03:28 PM.

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    Default Re: Sleepy head.

    let me post the photo for you.

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    Quote Originally Posted by yrh0413
    let me post the photo for you.
    Thank you.

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    Define 'anything' and the 'best' portrait.

    Then maybe we might be able to help you out.
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    Quote Originally Posted by xsaifuddin
    Define 'anything' and the 'best' portrait.

    Then maybe we might be able to help you out.
    Anything would be composition, settings on the camera, framing etc.

    Best would be one of the few eye catching (personally) photos I've taken and correct(if not close enough) settings to achieve this photo.

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    Default Re: Sleepy head.

    All I see is a bunch of hair, a big nose with glasses resting on a bag. You showed the arms but they are cut off at 3 edges.

    I do not find this picture appealing. Please try again.

    Here are some tips for shooting portraits.
    http://www.digital-photography-schoo...otography-tips
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    Default Re: Sleepy head.

    Quote Originally Posted by daredevil123 View Post
    All I see is a bunch of hair, a big nose with glasses resting on a bag. You showed the arms but they are cut off at 3 edges.

    I do not find this picture appealing. Please try again.

    Here are some tips for shooting portraits.
    http://www.digital-photography-schoo...otography-tips
    mmmm alright will read into it.

 

 

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